1ForSorrow2ForJoy on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/1forsorrow2forjoy/art/A-beautiful-thing-lineart-3126250641ForSorrow2ForJoy

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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I can see how much hard work and thought you've put into this piece, the amount of detail is amazing, and the image really sets the scene from the story. I'm really looking forward to seeing the finished coloured piece, and I really like the animals watching from the branch. You already know from the Critique I wrote about the story how much I enjoyed it, and this outstanding image adds even more depth and meaning to it. As I was reading the story, I could just imagine how disorientated and worried Magpie was as she found herself in such an unfamiliar place, it sounded like she was worried she may have been losing her grip on reality when she felt she couldn't trust her own sensors.